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MoTy's avatar

Pass it on x

Olly von's avatar

Puff puff 😏

Ray Sweatman's avatar

I like your Mary Jane; well done

Olly von's avatar

Thank you Ray :)

Kathy Dirickson's avatar

Nice poem. It also made me think about yesteryears!

Olly von's avatar

I’m so glad you liked it !

Ramona Moth's avatar

as always compelled to say I just love your writing

Olly von's avatar

Thank you so much Ramona <3333

Petra's avatar

Mary feels almost dreamlike, and the ending lands gently in that quiet closeness between people.<3

Olly von's avatar

Thinking back on those memories does sort of feel like a dream feels like another world entirely that picture is the first taken of me and my partner when we met all those years ago so much has changed since then

Petra's avatar

Thanks for sharing that. <3