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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

The image of the tears left alone in the basket stayed with me. There’s something deeply human in the way the poem lets grief appear through objects rather than explanations.

Olly von's avatar

Thank you I always appreciate you

More Than Poetry's avatar

So good! Loved hearing your voice💛

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Thank you that means so much to me

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💛💛💛

Suzie's avatar

Olly!!! Beautiful words but so beautifully spoken 🖤🖤🖤

Nick Hills's avatar

Everyday life mixed with emotions, just perfect, great poem!

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Thank you nick<3

𝚋𝚞𝚜 𝚜𝚝𝚘𝚙 𝚐𝚒𝚛𝚕's avatar

Olly this is beautiful. The mundane holds so much depth. Really lovely work

Olly von's avatar

Thank you so much 🙏🏼

nekonoir's avatar

This poem penetrated deeply into my soul. Beautiful!

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Thank you neko <333

Luna💫's avatar

Gorgeous Olly ✨

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Thank you Luna!

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Poignant. Vivid details ✨️ 👌

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Thank you Ray!

MoTy's avatar

“your tears, alone in the basket” - impossible image x

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Thank you Moty!

Andrew Baglia ✨⛏️'s avatar

Intensely lovely imagery and voice.

Olly von's avatar

Thank you so much Andrew!

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

beautiful <3 love the voiceover! i had the same birds singing outside my window while i listened to yours XD

Olly von's avatar

Awh that’s so sweet it was like we were right next to eachother

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

<3

Gan's avatar

startles the summer silent

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Thank you gan!

Aaliya's avatar

There is so much sadness here, but also so much tenderness. Thank you for sharing it 🤍